Hey guys this is the first parent I have drawn so far
Tell me what you guys think about it and remember your actions are the story..and the story will be told..
Progress on Characters So Far
Thu, 2018-02-22 00:57
Alexandra
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Her name is Marian Lily Plant by the way :)
well . looks nice but the hair kinda changed her look and there is something makes her looks weird idk is it the mouth or cuz her eyes are closed . but still looks cool
idk . i feel nothing cuz idk why she closing her eyes while doing that move with ber mouth tho the mouth and the nose dont fit each other . look clearly the nose is on the left and the mouth on the middle . tho its look like someone told her to close her eyes cuz he about to show her something beautiful or to ask her to marry from him tho the mouths dont fit to that . so its like idk . i feel like ahe isnt feeling anything .
try to change the mouth move . sorry but saying all this will mame u better in future Xd u already good !! better then by 100 lol . so think about that :p
idk . i feel nothing cuz idk why she closing her eyes while doing that move with ber mouth tho the mouth and the nose dont fit each other . look clearly the nose is on the left and the mouth on the middle . tho its look like someone told her to close her eyes cuz he about to show her something beautiful or to ask her to marry him tho the mouth dont fit to that moment . so its like idk . i feel like she isnt feeling anything .
try to change the mouth move . sorry but saying all this will make u better in future Xd u already good !! u draw better then me by 100 lol . so think about that :p
ЖФJackNoMercyФЖ, thanks for the advice :) lol while reading your comments I was laughing XD
Alexandra, XD
Overall, nice drawing. Although, you used too much blush and the lips are placed unevenly.
Tsduk, thank you! Also, I see it now :)
Im writing the script people so enjoy my writings
Good Job!
-Ķøhåķů-, thanks! :)
Im on Chapter 2 people so were getting there. Much conflict is happening so be prepared